Sunday, January 15, 2012

The World (Poem)

The World, it seems to be very lovely 
But all the people here aren't so bubbly
The world, with a lovely sky 
Where a bird is like a spy
The world, with things which might be wrong or right
To get something here, sometimes you've to do fight
The world, Here you've to follow some rules
But people who actually do so, are called fools
The world, with really different creatures
All of them with very unique features
The world, full of people who are stupid
Colours of life here are very vivid
The world, some people here are very rude
Surviving here isn't just about food
The world, where same thing differs from mind to mind
Only a few people are here actually hearty kind

The world, it seems to be too different
From it, everything came & to it, went
The world, with each & every different trend
Everything which started here, here only did end

The world, finally there's no conclusion 
Sometimes I think, maybe it's just an illusion...

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(originally posted on http://allpoetry.com/poem/9521821-The_World-by-De... )

The world can be seen through a spectrum of ideas and situations. Things indeed are not always as they seem on the surface, it is also true that sometimes it can be a struggle to achieve our goals. Everyone has their own view of how the world seems to them personally, this is why there are such a variety of ideas. The last two lines of the poem say it all from a personal point of view. Imagery and tone are well done.

Well done, continue to enjoy your writing and the site.

Katie

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